The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie-chart indicates the average percentages in the USA everyday meals of three types of nutrients, all of which bring negative effects to your health if consumed too much.
At first glance,it can be seen that
dinner
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of sodium and saturated fat, and Use synonyms
breakfast
is the most healthy among all meals. To be more specific, it is evident that the Use synonyms
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dinner
is the highest at a whopping 43% since it is the biggest meal of the day followed by lunch at 29%, Use synonyms
breakfast
and snacks share the same Use synonyms
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at 14%. In saturated fat pie, it is nearly identical to the sodium pie chart with Use synonyms
dinner
containing the most fat at 37%, and the least fat in Use synonyms
breakfast
at 16%. Snacks overthrow Use synonyms
dinner
in the Use synonyms
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of added sugar at the percentages of 42% to 23% and Use synonyms
breakfast
is still the healthiest of them all at 16%.Use synonyms
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