The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.
The surveys were done 2 times,
in
the beginning of the first Change the preposition
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decade
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the 21st
at the end
of the decade
. The surveys result
are grouped into 3 big categories: Fix the agreement mistake
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students
who only speak English
, students
who speak English
and 1 other language
and students
who speak English
and 2 other languages
. For the dual language
category, it is then
divided into several second
languages
( other than English
) list. These second
languages
are German, French, Spanish and another
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other languages
language
( other than the previous ones).
Students
who speak dual languages
represented the biggest proportion, constituting more than half of the total population both in 2000 and 2010. Spanish was the most spoken second
language
in both years. Students
who spoke only the English
language
represented the second
biggest number
in 2000, while
in 2010, they shared the same number
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spoke
languages
.
The number
of students
who speak English
only was
decreased by half from 2000 to 2010. For the dual Unnecessary verb
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language
category, French experienced a decline of 5% in a decade
, while
Spanish and other languages
enjoyed an increase in the span of 10 years. germany
remained unchanged throughout the Change the capitalization
Germany
decade
. The number
of students
who speak three languages
remained stable as well in both survey
. It can be concluded that more Change to a plural noun
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students
were capable of speaking dual languages
throughout the years.Submitted by nicolasbungaran on
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