The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
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The line graph shows the number of books borrowed in four different months of 2014 from four rural libraries, and the pie
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shows the percentage of books by type that were borrowed during that time. We can see the main general trends: down and up.West Eaton gradually increases from June (50) to September (one hundred and fifty), selling the same as Church Mount.
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falls sharply from 300 to 200
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fluctuates (from 250
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to 100
) and rises sharply(300)
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book sciences buy up a larger proportion (49 per
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) than self-help help (ten per
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we see that fiction and history buy up equally (fourteen per
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) but biology takes up not much space (nineteen per
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) from half of the
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. In the
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book sales,
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we are shown for how many months certain books have sold out and
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the ups and downs in sales
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