The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vedstarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features(150 words)

The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vedstarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features(150 words)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vedstarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features(150 words)
From 1960
to2020
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to 2020
in
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apply
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the
UK
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has been changes
about
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in
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adolescents following a vegetarian diet in the
UK
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The
first,
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in 1960, only one
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percent
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per cent
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is
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apply
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chose
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a vegetarien
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vegetarien
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vegetarian
diet. The
second,
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it
increase
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increased
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in 1970 amount 7-8
percent
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.
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it
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continued
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continue
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continue to
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increase and there was
an
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a
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steeply
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steep
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increase
in1980
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in 1980
. We saw from 1960 to 1980 in
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UK
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the UK
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have been
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that
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adolescents chose
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet amount 15
percent
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.
Beside
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, the
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percent
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percentage
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fell in 1990 amount 6
percent
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. It
continue
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to
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until
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2010.
Then
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it
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is
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no change
in2020
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in 2020
Overall
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, the graph shows two main
period
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periods
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of interest in
begetarian
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vegetarian
of young people in
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UK
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the UK
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: one
is reach
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reached
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a peak
at
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in
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1980 and hit a law
at
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in
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1960

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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