The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data illustrates a comparison of
electricity
production units
by fuel source
in Australia
and France
over a 20 year
period.
In 1980, it can be analyzed that Add a hyphen
20-year
electricity
in Australia
is mainly fueled by coal, comprising 50 out of 100 units
. Around the same time in France
, electricity
mostly originates from 2 different sources, Coal and Natural Gas
, both
at 25 out of 90 units
. In Australia
, Hydro
Power
and Natural Gas
both
equally act as the second main sources of electricity
at 20 out of 100 units
. The remaining portion of 10 Australian electricity
units
is generated by Oil
. In France
, the second biggest electrical source
is oil
at 20 out of 90 units
. Unlike Australia
, France
also
utilizes Nuclear Power
for electricity
at 15 units
out of 100. Hydro
Power
use
is relatively low in this
country, only at 5 out of 90 units
.
After 20 years, the use
of coal for electricity
dramatically soared in Australia
, from 50 out of 100 to 130 out of 170 units
. Hydro
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Hydropower
power
use
did increase to 36 out of 170 units
. On the other hand
, Australia
witnessed a depletion of both
natural gas
and oil
use
, to just 2 out of 170 units
. In 2000, there was a dramatic upward trend of
nuclear Change preposition
in
power
use
in France
from 15 out of 90 to 126 out of 180 units
. The usage of coal dwindled to 25 out of 180 units
. Similarly
, oil
use
also
declined to 25 out of 180 units
. Natural Gas
and Hydro
Power
uses also
suffered a fall, both
to 2 out of 180 units
.
All in all, significant changes can be analyzed regarding the usage of different electricity
sources in Australia
and France
in 1980 and 2000. In Australia
, coal became widely popular as a fuel source
after 20 years. In France
, Nuclear Power
use
as an electricity
source
climbed dramatically from 1980 to 2000.Submitted by anindyadewi58 on
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