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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data illustrates a comparison of
electricity
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 production
units
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 by fuel
source
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 in
Australia
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 and
France
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 over a
20 year
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 period. In 1980, it can be analyzed that
electricity
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 in
Australia
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 is mainly fueled by coal, comprising 50 out of 100
units
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. Around the same time in
France
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,
electricity
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 mostly originates from 2 different sources, Coal and Natural
Gas
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,
both
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 at 25 out of 90
units
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. In
Australia
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,
Hydro
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Power
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 and Natural
Gas
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both
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 equally act as the second main sources of
electricity
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 at 20 out of 100
units
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. The remaining portion of 10 Australian
electricity
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units
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 is generated by
Oil
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. In
France
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, the second biggest electrical
source
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 is
oil
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 at 20 out of 90
units
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. Unlike
Australia
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,
France
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also
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 utilizes Nuclear
Power
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 for
electricity
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 at 15
units
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 out of 100.
Hydro
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Power
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use
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 is relatively low in
this
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 country, only at 5 out of 90
units
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. After 20 years, the
use
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 of coal for
electricity
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 dramatically soared in
Australia
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, from 50 out of 100 to 130 out of 170
units
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.
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Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
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use
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 did increase to 36 out of 170
units
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.
On the other hand
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,
Australia
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 witnessed a depletion of
both
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 natural
gas
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 and
oil
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use
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, to just 2 out of 170
units
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. In 2000, there was a dramatic upward trend
of
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 nuclear
power
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use
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 in
France
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 from 15 out of 90 to 126 out of 180
units
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. The usage of coal dwindled to 25 out of 180
units
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.
Similarly
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,
oil
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use
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also
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 declined to 25 out of 180
units
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. Natural
Gas
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 and
Hydro
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Power
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 uses
also
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 suffered a fall,
both
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 to 2 out of 180
units
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. All in all, significant changes can be analyzed regarding the usage of different
electricity
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 sources in
Australia
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 and
France
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 in 1980 and 2000. In
Australia
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, coal became widely popular as a fuel
source
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 after 20 years. In
France
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, Nuclear
Power
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use
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 as an
electricity
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source
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 climbed dramatically from 1980 to 2000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, units, source, australia, france, gas, both, hydro, power, oil, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • units of electricity production
  • fuel source
  • dominant source
  • reliance on coal
  • hydroelectric power
  • natural gas
  • significant reduction
  • primary source
  • drastically increased
  • transition
  • existing infrastructure
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