The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in

Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The data illustrates a comparison of
electricity
production
units
by fuel
source
in
Australia
and
France
over a
20 year
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period. In 1980, it can be analyzed that
electricity
in
Australia
is mainly fueled by coal, comprising 50 out of 100
units
. Around the same time in
France
,
electricity
mostly originates from 2 different sources, Coal and Natural
Gas
,
both
at 25 out of 90
units
. In
Australia
,
Hydro
Power
and Natural
Gas
both
equally act as the second main sources of
electricity
at 20 out of 100
units
. The remaining portion of 10 Australian
electricity
units
is generated by
Oil
. In
France
, the second biggest electrical
source
is
oil
at 20 out of 90
units
. Unlike
Australia
,
France
also
utilizes Nuclear
Power
for
electricity
at 15
units
out of 100.
Hydro
Power
use
is relatively low in
this
country, only at 5 out of 90
units
. After 20 years, the
use
of coal for
electricity
dramatically soared in
Australia
, from 50 out of 100 to 130 out of 170
units
.
Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
use
did increase to 36 out of 170
units
.
On the other hand
,
Australia
witnessed a depletion of
both
natural
gas
and
oil
use
, to just 2 out of 170
units
. In 2000, there was a dramatic upward trend
of
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nuclear
power
use
in
France
from 15 out of 90 to 126 out of 180
units
. The usage of coal dwindled to 25 out of 180
units
.
Similarly
,
oil
use
also
declined to 25 out of 180
units
. Natural
Gas
and
Hydro
Power
uses
also
suffered a fall,
both
to 2 out of 180
units
. All in all, significant changes can be analyzed regarding the usage of different
electricity
sources in
Australia
and
France
in 1980 and 2000. In
Australia
, coal became widely popular as a fuel
source
after 20 years. In
France
, Nuclear
Power
use
as an
electricity
source
climbed dramatically from 1980 to 2000.
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