The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph highlights data about employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, over a ten-year period between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that There are upward trends in both self-employment and public
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the public
sector
. However
, private
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the private
sector
experienced a gradual decrease through out
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throughout
public
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the public
sector
was the most popular one for many years
.
Looking at the details, regarding public
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the public
sector
, it started at approximately 38 per cent,
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then
remained stable for 2 years
. Having increased rapidly to nearly %50 by 2005, it then
saw fluctuation between %45 and %50 for the following four years
. Then
it rose negligibly to just over %50. As regards self-employment, it began at around %18 and then
rose to 20 per cent. Then
it decreased,
but got recovered by 2005. Remove the comma
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Next,
it saw a rapid increase in four years
to just %30 and remained stable until 2010.
Looking at the private sector
, it witnessed a gradual fall in the first three years
to around %40 by 2003, which was the most popular one compared with others. After that
it fell rapidly to just under %30 by 2008, after which it decreased dramatically to around %20 by 2010, which was the least-wanted Add a comma
that,
sector
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