You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the proportion of staff employed by age in the public sector in the UK in 2015 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two pie charts illustrate the percentages of the UK public sector

staffs

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staff

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occupied by

age

in 2015 and 2020. At a glance, the pie charts were divided into five categories. It is

interested

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to note that

while

the ratio of workers at the

age

between

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of

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21-30 dominated in both years, that of those who

in

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apply

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the

age

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aged

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31-40 drastically

decrease

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. Looking at

those

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that age

those ages

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age

which encountered the upward trend, more closely, the proportion of employees who in

the

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age

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aged

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of

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21-30 slightly increased from around 30% to 33% which was resemblance to the portion of

staffs

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staff

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in

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the

age

of 41-50 which dramatically rose around 0.5 times. Unlike the other

age

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ages

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that experienced a downward trend,

while

the portion of workers

in

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the

age

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ages

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of over 50 and 31-40 considerably

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from 23% to 16% and 21% to 11%, respectively, that of employees who were under 21 minimally solely 2%.