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The line graph below illustrates the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000.

The line graph below illustrates the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000.
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The given line graph illustrates how
much
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 3 types of forest industry
was
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were
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 produced in
UK
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the UK
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 over a period of 20 years from 1980 to 2000. Units of production are measured in million tonnes. It can be seen that only paper & packaging had a significantly increased number in production among 2 given decades,
while
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 2 others show
contrary
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 trend. In terms of the product with the highest number at the start, paper & packaging production stood at approximately 230 in 1980. In the following ten years, the number of productions increased slightly to 250 in 1990. From
this
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 point onwards, it rose significantly and reached a peak precisely at 350 in 2000. Regarding
to
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the other products with lower levels,
sawn-wood
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sawn wood
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 and wood pulp started exactly at 200 and about 165 respectively

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • projections
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