The charts gives information about the rate of electrical using for different purposes and how much time spent by the owner of houses in the year 1920 to 2019 in a country.
The line graph displays the use of electricity by house owners from 1920 to 2019, highlighting features
such
as washing machine
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machines
refrigerator
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refrigerators
cleaner
.
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cleaners
Overall
, the information in the line shows an increase in all features, being the use of refrigerator
highest than the others and the washing machine kept a slight rise.
In 1920, all categories rose, especially Correct article usage
the refrigerator
refrigerator
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refrigerators
a
significant growth, which started in 1960 with a modest increase until Correct article usage
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kept
stable. Verb problem
it remained
Also
, vacuum cleaner
illustrated a dramatic peak as well, which stopped in 2000, since from that year the data Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
kept
the same.
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remained
however
, washing
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machine
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machines
,
had Remove the comma
apply
a
moderate growth, which started from 40 in 1920 and stopped Correct article usage
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in
70 in 1940, to make a slight decrease to later go up again and be over 70.Change preposition
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