The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides data about the
value
of a particular country’s exports in different groups throughout 2015 and 2016. Use synonyms
Whereas
, the table indicates the difference Linking Words
of
percentage in each category in 2016 compared to 2015. Change preposition
in
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Petroleum Linking Words
products
have been the most exported items in both years.
In the year 2015, the Use synonyms
value
of Petroleum Use synonyms
products
Use synonyms
were
at $60 Change the verb form
was
billion
and rose up by 3% in 2016. Engineered goods had similar values as well, they had a Use synonyms
value
of $55 Use synonyms
billion
in 2015 and passed over 60 Use synonyms
billion
in the following year Use synonyms
due to
an 8.5% rise.
The remaining 3 categories were lower compared to Petroleum and Engineered Linking Words
products
. Gems and Jewellery were valued at over 40$ Use synonyms
billion
but had a 5.18% decrease in 2016. Agricultural Use synonyms
products
carried a Use synonyms
value
of $30 Use synonyms
billion
and had an increase up to only 0.81%. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Textiles were ranked at %25 Linking Words
billion
for Use synonyms
value
in 2015 and escalated to over %30 Use synonyms
billion
in 2016.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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