The charts below show the qualifications of staff in an advertising company in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrate the changes in the employees' background degrees in a Canadian advertising company Between 1990 and 2010. Units are measured in percentages.

Overall

, it can clearly be seen that the Social

Science

and Arts degrees still the majority throughout the given period

while

some others experienced both positive and negative growth.

Moreover

, the number of staff was drastically drown. In terms of

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qualification degree in 1990, Social

Science

and Arts, Administration and

Science

, Maths, and Computers were the majors and each of them accounted for respectively 20%, 19% and 18%.

While

other criteria

such

as Engineering, Humanities, Nursing, MBA and others made up below 10%. The ages spread from 25 to 35 with a total of 515,600 employees. Regarding the background degree in 2010, Social

Science

and Arts degrees are still dominant with

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increase to 21%. Both Administration and Education experienced a bit decrease around 2-4% each. Staff with an Engineering background had a dramatic growth to 19% and became second the most. On the other side,

Science

, Maths, and Computers witnessed a significant decline to just one-tenth.

However

, the total staff numbers

also

experienced negative growth by almost half with ages between 45 and 55.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words science with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

201 words

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Qualifications
Advertising company
Staff composition
High school diploma
Bachelor's degree
Postgraduate degree
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Educational qualifications
Shift in qualifications
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