You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The graphs below demonstrate what
graduate
and postgraduate Use synonyms
students
from Use synonyms
United
Kingdom who were not occupied in full-time Correct article usage
the United
job
did after leaving college in 2008.
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jobs
Overall
, the biggest number of Linking Words
graduate
Use synonyms
students
chose Use synonyms
further
education, Linking Words
while
voluntary Linking Words
work
was the most unpopular choice among Use synonyms
this
group. The second chart shows the same situation among postgraduates, where the main part of people decided to prolong their Linking Words
further
study, Linking Words
whereas
the small group of Linking Words
survey's
participants took voluntary Change noun form
survey
work
.
It's clear from the data, that Use synonyms
further
study was the most popular destination for both Linking Words
graduate
Use synonyms
students
(29665 people) and Use synonyms
post
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postgraduate
graduate
Use synonyms
students
(2725 people). The second place among Use synonyms
two
groups of Correct article usage
the two
students
took part-time Use synonyms
work
, Use synonyms
this
destination chose 17735 Linking Words
of
graduates and 2535 Change preposition
apply
of
postgraduates. Change preposition
apply
Less
Change the quantifier
Fewer
students
faced Use synonyms
with
unemployment, 16235 Change preposition
apply
of
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apply
graduate
Use synonyms
students
and 1625 Use synonyms
of
postgraduate Change preposition
apply
students
. The smallest number of participants decided to take voluntary Use synonyms
work
as their destination, 3500 Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
graduate
Use synonyms
students
and 345 Use synonyms
of
postgraduates.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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