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The graphs below show that post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55.

The graphs below show that post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55.
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The pie charts illustrate degree holders who related to two
age
 categories
whom
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 studied different fields in schools in Canada.
Overall
, most of the Canadians who are attributed to
age
 25-35, studied social
science
 and
arts
 at their schools
while
 many natives who related to the
age
 category of 45 - 55 , learned social
science
 and
arts
. With regards to the
age
 of 25 -35 , natives who learned social
science
 and
arts
 at 20%, followed by administration
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%,
science
 , maths computers
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% ,
education
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and education
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 and engineering
15
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% and 9% respectively.
Moreover
,
people
 who studied humanities and nursing
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% and 7% respectively. MBA holders are 6% and 2%
holds
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 other
qulaification
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qualification
qualifications
 which is not surveyed.
On the other hand
,
people
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 who
belongs
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 to the
age
 of 45-55 , 21% of
people
 mastered social
science
 and
arts
whereas
 19% and 15% of
people
 came from engineering and administration fields.
Furthermore
, it can be noticeable that a fourth
related
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 to both education and nursing fields.
People
 who followed
scienced
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science
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, maths,
computers
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and computers
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 at
10%.followed
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10 %.followed
 by humanities
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%. When it comes to MBA holders and other
qulaifications
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qualifications
, it seemed 3% each.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, science, arts, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • post-secondary education
  • vocational training
  • bachelor's degree
  • master's degree
  • doctorate
  • diploma
  • certificate
  • professional designation
  • full-time education
  • part-time study
  • apprenticeship
  • continuing education
  • adult learning
  • educational attainment
  • workforce qualifications
  • demographic breakdown
  • socio-economic factors
  • statistical analysis
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