The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the work office of
Canadian
for 5 different industries in Fix the agreement mistake
Canadians
years
1850 and 2020.
Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, in 2020,services reaches
81%, Wrong verb form
reached
compare
to 1850 it was just 33%. Change the form of the verb
compared
Also
, agriculture
and fishing industries in 2020 Change preposition
in agriculture
it
was just 1% same as energy and water in the same year.
In 2020, manufacturing and Correct pronoun usage
apply
constructin
industries Correct your spelling
construction
was
between 8% to 9%.Change the verb form
were
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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