The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how the cerment is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how the cerment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the stages of the
cement
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-making process and the concrete production used by
cement
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for construction aims.
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, there are several stages in each production, from crushing to mixing concrete. To commence with, limestone and clay are mixed together, and
then
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they go through the crusher, which converts them to powder.
Next,
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they pass through the mixer, which combines them well. After that,
this
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powder goes into the rotating heater, which is heated by the flame, after which, it is emptied on the grinder, and
cement
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is produced.
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, it is put in
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large bags. As regards, concrete production, the
cement
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bags are carried to the factory. After that, to create concrete, they use %15 of
the
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cement
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, %10 of water, %25 of sand and %50 of gravel, which all are put i
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a concretete
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n concrete
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concrete
te mixer tool, which combines the items and
finally
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, produces
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produces
ce it.
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