The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how the cerment is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the stages of the
cement
-making process and the concrete production used by cement
for construction aims.
Overall
, there are several stages in each production, from crushing to mixing concrete.
To commence with, limestone and clay are mixed together, and then
they go through the crusher, which converts them to powder. Next,
they pass through the mixer, which combines them well. After that, this
powder goes into the rotating heater, which is heated by the flame, after which, it is emptied on the grinder, and cement
is produced. Finally
, it is put in the
large bags.
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