The table shows the proportion of women in the labor force and women in management in five countries
The table illustrates the proportion of the females in the
labour
force
and females in the management
roles
in the different countries which are Australia, Egypt, Sri Lanka, Japan and America.Overall
, most women
choose to work in the labour
force
, especially in Japan.
It is clear that
Japanese women
marked the higher rates with 48% in the labour
force
but only 17% in the management
roles
.However
, women
in Australia and America have similar trend
in the Fix the agreement mistake
trends
labour
force
and management
roles
with 42%,43%,46% and 43% , respectively. In Sri Lanka, only fewer women
works
in Change the verb form
work
management
roles
with 9% shares but five times bigger the number in the labour
force
with 42% shares.
In addition
,women
in Egypt mostly stay at home as a
Correct article usage
apply
housewife
because of the culture that has influenced them over the centuries and only Fix the agreement mistake
housewives
Correct article usage
a fewer
fewer
of the Replace the word
few
women
are working in the labour
force
and in the
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apply
management
roles
with 20% and 12% , respectively.Submitted by tifjong on
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