The table shows the proportion of women in the labor force and women in management in five countries
The table illustrates the proportion of the females in the
labour
Use synonyms
force
and females in the Use synonyms
management
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roles
in the different countries which are Australia, Egypt, Sri Lanka, Japan and America.Use synonyms
Overall
, most Linking Words
women
choose to work in the Use synonyms
labour
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force
, especially in Japan.
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It is clear that
Japanese Linking Words
women
marked the higher rates with 48% in the Use synonyms
labour
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force
but only 17% in the Use synonyms
management
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roles
.Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
women
in Australia and America have similarUse synonyms
trend
in the Fix the agreement mistake
trends
labour
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force
and Use synonyms
management
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roles
with 42%,43%,46% and 43% , respectively. In Sri Lanka, only fewer Use synonyms
women
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works
in Change the verb form
work
management
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roles
with 9% shares but five times bigger the number in the Use synonyms
labour
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force
with 42% shares.
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In addition
,Linking Words
women
in Egypt mostly stay at home as Use synonyms
a
Correct article usage
apply
housewife
because of the culture that has influenced them over the centuries and only Fix the agreement mistake
housewives
Correct article usage
a fewer
fewer
of the Replace the word
few
women
are working in the Use synonyms
labour
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force
and in Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
management
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roles
with 20% and 12% , respectively.Use synonyms
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