You recently notice a local restaurant offering a part time job Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter •Explain that you would like to apply for this job •Give some details of relevant experience that you have •specify the date and time that would suit for you You should write at least 150 words You don’t write any address

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

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letter to present my interest in the server post for your restaurant, which you have posted in the local magazine.

However

,

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have finished my Diploma in Hospitality

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year, and now

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am keen to work with you

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part time

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to express my skills in your restaurant. Let me elaborate

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scenario. When

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was pursuing my course,

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had to

opt-in

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internship. I have finished my Co-op

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a local bar and

along with

my studies,

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worked in a Marriot hotel as a waiter.

Additionally

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have

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gained my Smart-Serve Certification and

also

know some basic

technique

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to

woek

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work

in the bar.

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would be grateful

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if you allow me

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post and give me a chance to present my skills in your restaurant.

Moreover

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am currently enrolled in my Food Handler Certificate, and

this

will end up by next week. So,

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will

available

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from 20th March and as

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perform some religious activity in the early morning, it would be great if you contact me after 11PM. Thank you for your consideration,

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would be grateful

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with you. Yours Sincerely Jay Chawla