The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The picture illustrates the
different
Replace the word
difference
of
the town of Stromer from 1995 to now. Change preposition
in
Overall
, the most significant changes in the map are Farmland and Forest
Fix the agreement mistake
Forests
which
sizes got smaller Correct pronoun usage
whose
in
now.
Change preposition
apply
First,
in 1955, there are two main area
which are placing the most spot. One of them is the Farmland which is Change to a plural noun
areas
placing
at the South. And Wrong verb form
placed
beside
to the left, roads are built. Replace the word
besides
Other
one is the Correct article usage
The other
Forest
which are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
placing
Wrong verb form
placed
to
the left side and the right side of the map. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, there are two Houses between
the Change preposition
in
Forest
.
Next,
in the present, there are various places: school
, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
airport
, shops etc. In the middle of the map the shops Fix the agreement mistake
airports
are covering
Wrong verb form
cover
school
and below it, three shops are built narrowly. Correct article usage
the school
In addition
, the airport is located at
the North and it is located beside the Change preposition
in
forest
and apartments.
Lastly
, Farmland sized down significantly which is placing
below the houses and there are 4 apartments beside the left.Wrong verb form
placed
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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