The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrations show the system of
water
supply in Australia at present and how it will be developed in the future
.
Overall
, it is clear that
storm
Correct your spelling
stormwater
water
stream
towards the Fix the agreement mistake
streams
river
at present; however
, it will flow towards water
treatment Correct article usage
the water
plant
in the Fix the agreement mistake
plants
future
. Additionally
, pure water
flows to the city from the dam's area now, but it is predicted to flows
from two sources in the Wrong verb form
flow
future
.
By looking at the first chart, dams store pure water
, so it provide different parts of the city with it. After that, the wasted water
streams to the treatment plant then
to the Correct word choice
and then
river
, whereas
the storm
Correct your spelling
stormwater
water
flows directly to the river
. This
current system can harm the environment because of the wasted and stormed water
that go
toward the Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
river
.
In the future
, the water
supply system is considered to be safe compared to the current one. There is no difference between the two systems in the first step; therefore
, the storage source provides the city with the
pure Correct article usage
apply
water
. However
, the stormed and wasted water
will flow to the treatment plant, and come out in a pure water
form.Submitted by layanalotaibi7 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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