The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart
provide
data about the Change the verb form
provides
percentage
Use synonyms
teenager
in Change preposition
of teenager
UK
who were on a vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020 over a period of 60 years.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, what can we understand Linking Words
out
from the graph is that the Change preposition
apply
percentage
of adolescents Use synonyms
reash
a peak in 1980 to be 15 Correct your spelling
reached
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Also
, the lowest Linking Words
percentage
was in 1970.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, from 1960 to 1980 the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
teenager
who were on a diet increased sharply to 15 percent. Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers
While
the Linking Words
percentage
of adolescents fluctuated from 1990 to 2000 Use synonyms
then
they rose gradually to Linking Words
reash
13 Correct your spelling
reach
percent
in 2010 and Change the spelling
per cent
remain
stable Wrong verb form
remained
antile
2020.Correct your spelling
until
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