The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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data about the

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who were on a vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020 over a period of 60 years.

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from the graph is that the

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of adolescents

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reached

a peak in 1980 to be 15

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, the lowest

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who were on a diet increased sharply to 15 percent.

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of adolescents fluctuated from 1990 to 2000

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they rose gradually to

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in 2010 and

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until

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The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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School students should have no access to the Internet. Discuss both sides of the argument and give your opinion.