The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart
provide
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data about the
percentage
teenager
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of teenager
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in
UK
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the UK
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who were on a vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020 over a period of 60 years.
Overall
, what can we understand
out
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from the graph is that the
percentage
of adolescents
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reached
a peak in 1980 to be 15
percent
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.
Also
, the lowest
percentage
was in 1970.
Moreover
, from 1960 to 1980 the
percentage
of
teenager
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teenagers
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who were on a diet increased sharply to 15 percent.
While
the
percentage
of adolescents fluctuated from 1990 to 2000
then
they rose gradually to
reash
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reach
13
percent
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in 2010 and
remain
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remained
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stable
antile
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until
2020.
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