The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph illustrates the proportions of Australians maintaining physical exercise' based on diverse
age
groups in 2010.
Overall
, it is clear to see that women
were active in terms of doing physical activity, whereas
men
showed less.
The percentages of females were almost the highest compared with all groups, except the under-24-year-old youth percentage, where they attended more than females (47.7%), at 52.8%. The 45–54 age
group of females peaked at 53.3%; that was its apex. Women
gained 52.5% in the 35–44 age
group, whereas
men
showed a 39.5% proportion in this
sector. The residents of Australia also
followed the same trend in the 25-34 and 55-64 age
groups, where they acquired 42.2%, 45.1%, and 48.9%, respectively, for men
and women
. In the majority of the age
group, which was 65 and over, men
and women
were doing exercise almost the same, at 46.7% and 47.1% for male and female, respectivelySubmitted by saimonsohan121 on
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