The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010

Data about the percentage of the

tourists

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tourist's

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attendance to four various attractions in Brighton throughout

years

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the years

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is given in the graph.

Overall

,all three of the attractions went through dramatic changes,except for the Festival,which remained unchanged compared to others.

It is clear that

the percentage of visitors

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the Pavilion was the highest among the other three,starting

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with

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at

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25

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per cent

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in its first year and increasing gradually in 1995,having more than twice the percentage of visitors compared with the

Art

Gallery

,

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approximately 50 and 20

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.

However

,the popularity of both the Pavilion and the

Art

Gallery

suddenly decreased and

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of visitors fell and

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off,making the

Art

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the least preferable attraction.

Furthermore

,the Pier experienced wild fluctuations but the trend was upward,catching up with the

Art

Gallery

in 2005 and surpassing it

at the end

. All in all,based on the graph,the Pavilion remains the most well-known highlight in England

according to

tourists.