The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart illustrates three various sectors which
are
contributed Unnecessary verb
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in
the economy of Britain in Change preposition
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a
twentieth century.
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Overall
, it can be seen that manufacturing has been decreasing over the century, while
the business and finance contribution witnessed a dramatic rise over the given period.
In detail, the
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agriculture
provided the highest ratio of the economy of the UK at 50%. The second highest proportion belonged to the
manufacturing at almost 45%. In the meantime, the business and financial part was nearly close to 0 per cent. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, in 1950, compared to fifty years ago, the agriculture
and the manufacturing had around 5% increase, whereas
the finance sector had a slight fall.
In the following 25 years, the agriculture
part had a considerable drop which was around 40%, while
the business went up to approximately 20 per cent. Finally
, at the end
of the priode
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period
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the economical
economical
part sharply rose and reached Replace the word
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peak at 35%, Correct article usage
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while
the
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agriculture
, which provided the highest portion of the economy of the UK in
the beginning of the century, reduced to almost 0%.Change the preposition
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