A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company.
In your letter,
-introduce your previous work experience
-tell the manager which department you want to work
-describe what expectation you have from the job
suggestion for work. I honestly believe that I will have more knowledge
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and work experience. I want to be part of
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Greeting and Closing
Begin by formally addressing the manager and stating the purpose of your letter. Use 'Dear [Manager's Name]' or 'Dear Manager' if the name is unknown.
Introduction
Ensure to introduce yourself properly by mentioning your name and relevant work experience that makes you a suitable candidate for the position.
Body
Clearly state the department you are interested in working for, and explain why you believe you would be a good fit. Providing specific reasons or experiences can help strengthen your request.
Body
Express your expectations from the job more clearly. Mention what skills or experiences you hope to gain and how they align with your career goals.
Greeting and Closing
End your letter with a formal closing, such as 'Yours sincerely' followed by your full name.
Logical structure
To improve coherence, structure your letter into clear paragraphs: introduction, body (previous experience, preferred department, job expectations), and conclusion.
Single Idea per Paragraph
To make each paragraph cohesive, focus on a single idea in each paragraph. This makes your letter easier to follow and understand.
Complete Response
Ensure complete responses by thoroughly addressing all parts of the task. Revisit the given instructions and check if each point has been clearly and fully addressed in your letter.
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain a suitable writing tone throughout your letter. While your enthusiasm is good, ensure that your tone remains professional as it is a formal letter to a potential employer.
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