You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the details Explain the reason for the celebration Say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to appreciate your restaurant
for its pleasant service and enjoyable food.
I was
thinking Wrong verb form
have been
to visit
your Change preposition
of visiting
restaurant
from
a long time. Change preposition
for
However
,
I have an abundance of problem
with my work and family. And, I Fix the agreement mistake
problems
decided
go to the Add the particle
decided to
restaurant
with my friends. We celebrated Shayla's b-day. All togethe
.
Correct your spelling
together
we
were 5 people.
Your Correct pronoun usage
There
restaurant
was so lively, you know. There has
a vast amount of superb Verb problem
is
singer
and lovely Fix the agreement mistake
singers
dancer
. They were so awesome. When we were eating Fix the agreement mistake
dancers
main
course and gossiping Change the article
the main
other
girls Change preposition
about other
that
suddenly we heard Selena's delighted voice. We can't believe in our eyes. Selena is the best singer, I would say. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, my best friend Shayla also
sang with Selena. That
is
was her dream. Umm, she achieved one of Unnecessary verb
apply
the
her best Remove the article
apply
dream
from my point of view. I think your place was out of Change to a plural noun
dreams
this
world. There was plenty Change preposition
of foods
foods
. I loved Fix the agreement mistake
food
dessert
Malabi. Correct article usage
the dessert
This
was enjoyable for me. I sincerely appreciate your service and nice
waitress. She was so Correct article usage
the nice
breathtaking
girl and so elated. I Correct article usage
a breathtaking
also
thanks
her help. I'm thrilled to go Change the verb form
thank
you
Change preposition
to you
on
Change preposition
to
restaurant
. I'm so glad for that.
Soon, I'll come again with my family.
Warm wishes
Yours faithfully,
BayramoySubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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task achievement
Focus on directly addressing each prompt point in separate paragraphs to ensure clarity and full task coverage.
suitable writing tone
Use formal language appropriate for a letter to a manager, avoiding overly casual phrases and ensuring correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
logical structure
Organize your letter logically with a clear introduction, body paragraphs each covering a specific point, and a conclusion to improve readability and effectiveness.
greeting and closing
Include a proper greeting (e.g., 'Dear Manager,') and closing ('Yours sincerely, [Your full name]') to adhere to letter-writing conventions.
single idea per paragraph
Dedicate each paragraph to a single idea, using transitions to link them for smoother progression and better understanding.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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