The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph examines changes that have occurred in the populations of

India

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and China between 2000 and now, with estimations of

population

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size by 2050.

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, the number of inhabitants has increased in both countries to date, but where in 2000 the gap between them was quite significant, today they are on par with one another. In 2000, the total

population

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of China was at around 1.25 billion people, 250 million more than in

India

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China’s numbers continued to climb steadily, the Indian

population

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experienced a more dramatic rise, with both countries currently neck and neck. It is anticipated that

India

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will surpass China,

population

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-wise, within the next five to ten years, continuing

this

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uptrend and reaching approximately 1.6 billion people by 2050. China’s growth,

on the other hand

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, is set to slow down and plateau between 2030 and 2050, with its estimated

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finishing at just under 1.4 billion (roughly 200 million fewer people than in

India

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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, population with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

160 words

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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

some people feel that free time is something valuable.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?