The line graph shows the growth in the population of UK from 1971 to 2006 and projections until 2031. The pie chart shows the population of different nationalities in the UK in the year 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The following line graph illustrates the step-up in the populace of
UK
from 1971 to 2006 and Correct article usage
the UK
prediction
until 2023. The pie chart displays the population of dissimilar nationalities in the UK in the year 2006.
Correct article usage
the prediction
Overall
, the index of Spain and Greece increased slightly, meanwhile
France had gradual decreases and only Norway had rapid Add a comma
meanwhile,
changes
.
Examining the line graph, we can observe some changes
. Greece had 1 tons
of CO2 emissions per person in 1971 but every year Change to a singular noun
ton
this
index slightly increased until 2005 then
had no changes
. Spain had a bigger coefficient than Greece it was 4 tons
, from 1971 until 1985 the index of Spain went up. After 1985 it didn’t have much change.
The average CO2 emissions per person in Norway had increased by 10 tons
but then
went down with a result of 5,5 tons
by 2015. France comparing
to Norway didn’t have that much of Wrong verb form
compared
changes
, they had 11,5 tons
in 1971, every year the CO2 emissions gradually decreased and by 2015 went down to 8 tons
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