The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different variables are measured in percentages.
This
graph shows how the Population
Birth
rate
and death
rate
have changed between the years
1940 and 2020 in Scotland.
We can see that birth
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the birth
rate
has decreased exponentially and dropped almost 2% in 80 years
. Death
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The death
rate
lowered 1
% in 20 Change preposition
by 1
years
, stabalized
for 50 Correct your spelling
stabilized
stabilised
years
, and in 2020 Grew almost 5% it also
shows a stopagge
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stoppage
storage
Population
growth betwee
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between
years
2000 and 2010.
From this
information
we can tell that these three variables are Add a comma
information,
conected
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connected
Due to
the fact, that if the Birth
Rate
decreases, population
growth will also
lower, and death
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the death
rate
will increase because the elderly will start to pass away and with no increse
in Correct your spelling
increase
birth
rate
, death
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the death
rate
will increase.
After, analizing
the spike in 1955, we can determine that Correct your spelling
analysing
Birth
date and population
rate
depend from
each other, and have almost Change preposition
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and
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apply
variable
throughout the Fix the agreement mistake
variables
years
1940 and 2020. The Stabilization of the death
rate
seems weird because both other variables lowered it was probably the variable adjusting to the changes in the population
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