You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter •Tell them why you need to move the interview time •Ask to change the interview date •Explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear sir,
My name is Mohit and you selected me for
business
manager position in your company and Correct article usage
the business
schedule
Wrong verb form
scheduled
interview
on Correct article usage
an interview
february28
, 2024. In Correct your spelling
February 28
this
letter
I want to request you that I am not able to come for Add a comma
letter,
interview
because Correct article usage
an interview
on
the same day, my sister's marriage is fixed which I want to attend. I have Add the comma(s)
, on
my
only one sister and I do not Correct pronoun usage
apply
want
leave her alone on her special day.
I know that you are looking for Add the particle
want to
employee
who is hardworking and potential but I am helpless here. I hope you will understand my situation and move my interview date to March 1, 2024. I promise you that I will never give you a chance to regret Add an article
an employee
on
your decision. I am Change preposition
apply
hard
worker employee and I have experience Correct article usage
a hard
of
one year as Change preposition
apply
manager
in Correct article usage
a manager
other
company which is Correct quantifier usage
another
a
asset. I will definitely work for your company honestly and Change the article
an
helps
you to achieve high benefits in future.
I am waiting for your response
Your's faithfully
MohitCorrect subject-verb agreement
help
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Task Response
To improve your task response score, consider expanding on your reasons for being unable to attend the interview on the original date in more detail. Additionally, providing alternative dates or times for the interview could demonstrate flexibility and eagerness for the position.
Coherence and Cohesion
For better coherence and cohesion, aim to link your ideas more smoothly within and between paragraphs. Use a range of connectors and transition words to make your letter flow more naturally. Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs: one for explaining your situation, one for requesting the new interview date, and one for reinforcing your interest in the job.
Writing Tone
Remember to use a polite and professional tone throughout your letter. Although your letter is mostly polite, ensuring consistency in formality (for example, using 'Dear Sir or Madam' if you don't know the name of the person) and avoid phrases that could come off as overly casual or demanding.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite