The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The table aims to convey information regarding hours and minutes devoted by UK
men
and women
on
multiple daily Change preposition
to
activities
.
At one glance, it could be revealed that women
pay attention more into
self-care including sleep and rest than Change preposition
to
men
. Also
, men
would rather have leisure than women
.
Totally, there was an hour difference between men
and women
for employment and study. Women
consuming
double as much time as Wrong verb form
consume
men
on housework and childcare. Men
have more appetite than women
to travel and sports. While
, women
prefer resting and relaxing, doing voluntary works
and meeting. Other Fix the agreement mistake
work
activities
are significantly equal between the two groups
Overall
, it can be deduced that UK males are choosing games and wasting activities
to
recreation after outdoor duties Change preposition
for
such
as drinking or watching movies. In contrast
, females are going to spirit their souls after a
long housekeeping by socializing and meeting and cultural Remove the article
apply
activities
such
as reading.Submitted by imaneslampanahiep on
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