The chart below shows percentages of males and females working for different duration (hours) per week in Australia in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar diagram displays the proportions of

men

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and

women

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working for various

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duration

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in Australia in the year

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2007. The units are measured in

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per

week

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. In the working period of 0-5

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per

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, the ratio of male

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about 2% is lower than the ratio of female

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about 5%. After that, a similar situation could be

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found in the proportion of

men

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workers

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and

women

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workers

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of 6-10

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per

week

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and 11-15

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per

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,

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the

percentage

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of

men

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workers

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is slightly less than

women

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workers

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. Notably, the percentages of

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and females working for 16-20

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per

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are equal, which

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just under 10%.

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in the 21-35

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per

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interval, the proportion of

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workers

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and

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workers

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both rises a little to above 10%, but the

percentage

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of

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is still less than

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. Noticeably, it hits a peak within the

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hours

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of 35-40

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per

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, which means that the

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of male

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is about 35% and the

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of female

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is just above 30%. When it comes to the

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period of 41-45

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per

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, the proportions of

males

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and females drop to about 17% and 15% respectively, with a similar tendency of

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46-50

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per

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.

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, in the working

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of 50

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more

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, the

rate

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of

males

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inclines to about 5% and the

rate

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of

males

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descends to just around 3%. To summarise, it draws

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ascending trajectory in the

duration

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hours

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of 0-40

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that

males

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and females working for, which is

followd

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followed

by a dropping trend in the

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hours

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of 41-50+

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. It is

also

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worth

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that the

percentage

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of male

workers

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working surpass the

percentage

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of female

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working from 35-40

duration

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hours

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.