The chart below shows percentages of males and females working for different duration (hours) per week in Australia in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar diagram displays the proportions of

men

and

women

working for various

duration

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in Australia in the year

of

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2007. The units are measured in

hours

per

week

. In the working period of 0-5

hours

per

week

, the ratio of male

workers

about 2% is lower than the ratio of female

workers

about 5%. After that, a similar situation could be

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found in the proportion of

men

workers

and

women

workers

of 6-10

hours

per

week

and 11-15

hours

per

week

,

that is

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the

percentage

of

men

workers

is slightly less than

women

workers

. Notably, the percentages of

males

and females working for 16-20

hours

per

week

are equal, which

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just under 10%.

Then

in the 21-35

duration

hours

per

week

interval, the proportion of

men

workers

and

women

workers

both rises a little to above 10%, but the

percentage

of

men

is still less than

women

. Noticeably, it hits a peak within the

duration

hours

of 35-40

hours

per

week

, which means that the

rate

of male

workers

is about 35% and the

rate

of female

workers

is just above 30%. When it comes to the

duration

period of 41-45

hours

per

week

, the proportions of

males

and females drop to about 17% and 15% respectively, with a similar tendency of

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46-50

hours

per

week

.

Then

, in the working

duration

of 50

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more

hours

, the

rate

of

males

inclines to about 5% and the

rate

of

males

descends to just around 3%. To summarise, it draws

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ascending trajectory in the

duration

hours

of 0-40

hours

that

males

and females working for, which is

followd

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followed

by a dropping trend in the

duration

hours

of 41-50+

hours

. It is

also

worth

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that the

percentage

of male

workers

working surpass the

percentage

of female

workers

working from 35-40

duration

hours

.