The chart below shows percentages of males and females working for different duration(hours) per week in Australia in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar diagram displays the proportions of
men
and women
working for various durations in Australia in the year 2007. The units are measured in hours
per 7 days
.
In the working period of 0-5 hours
per 7 days
, the ratio of male workers
about 2% is lower than the ratio of female workers
about 5%. After that, a similar situation could be found in the proportion of men
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male
workers
and women
workers
of 6-10 hours
per 7 days
and 11-15 hours
per week
, that is
to say, the percentage
of men
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male
workers
is slightly less than women
workers
. Notably, the percentages of males
and females working for 16-20 hours
per week
are equal, which is just under 10%. Then
in the 21-35 duration
hours
per week
interval, the proportion of men
workers
and women
workers
both rises a little to above 10%, but the percentage
of men
is still less than women
. Noticeably, it hits a peak within the duration
hours
of 35-40 hours
per week
, which means that the rate
of male workers
is about 35% and the rate
of female workers
is just above 30%. When it comes to the duration
period of 41-45 hours
per 7 days
, the proportions of males
and females drop to about 17% and 15% respectively, with a similar tendency of 46-50 hours
per 7 days
. Then
, in the working duration
of 50 or more hours
, the rate
of males
inclines to about 5% and the rate
of males
descends to just around 3%.
To summarise, it draws an ascending trajectory in the duration
hours
of 0-40 hours
that males
and females working
for, which is followed by a dropping trend in the Wrong verb form
work
duration
hours
of 41-50+ hours
. It is also
worth attention that the percentage
of male workers
working surpass
the Change the verb form
surpasses
percentage
of female workers
working from 35-40 duration
hours
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