The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give information on the percentage of
water
consumption for various reasons in 6 continents scattered over the world.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the vast majority of water
belong
to agricultural purposes in most areas, which is followed by Change the verb form
belongs
industial
use and Correct your spelling
industrial
lastly
, domestic use.
It can be seen that over 70% to 88% of aquatic uses is distributed to argicultural
purposes in South America, Africa, Central Correct your spelling
agricultural
Asia
and South East Asia
. Given only 7% to 9%, domestic uses are settled as the 2nd rank for Africa and Central Asia
. In contrast
, South East Asia
's second biggest
consumption falls to Add a hyphen
second-biggest
industrial
aspect, dominating 12%.
Correct article usage
the industrial
Conversely
, for 48% and 53% on
industrial Change preposition
of
usages
, North America and Europe respectively rank as champion and 1st runner-up for the immense Fix the agreement mistake
usage
water
consumption. Additionally
, both areas share argricultural
aspect as the second majority of Correct your spelling
an agricultural
water
usage, with 39% and 32% uses. Lastly
, with solely
13 to 15%, both continents spend the least Correct your spelling
only
water
allocation on domestic contexts.Submitted by lokyiu612 on
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