The given pie charts shows the proportion of British students able yo use languages other than english. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The given pie charts shows the proportion of British students able yo use languages other than english. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the number of languages that
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British scholars can use apart from English in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, the language ability of students was similar in the period with
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% change in maximum. The pupils speaking Spanish only rated the highest percentage in both 2000 and 2010
while
the students who speak German only rated the least proportion throughout the period.
On the other hand
, people who use no other language significantly decreased. Looking at
Spanish only
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statistics, it raised from 30% to 35% from 2000 to 2010.
In contrast
, students who just speak
Enlgish
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English
dropped the most from 20% to 10%. Looking at the
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proportion statistics, it was two other languages and German only in 2000; German only remained the least in 2010 and
also
with the categories of French only and No other language sharing the same percentage of 10%.
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