The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many books were lent in four different rural libraries over the period of 4-months from June to September
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2014. and the pie chart illustrates the proportion of records, by type, that were borrowed over
this
time. It can be seen that
while
there was a fluctuation
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the number of borrowed books in Sutton Wood before reaching the highest point in the final months and crossing those in Ryeslip,
remaining
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libraries increased slightly during the period of the months.
To begin
with, Ryeslip was a significant decrease from 300 to over 150 in September. The figures for Sutton Wood increased from 250 to approximately 280 in July before declining considerably to 100 in August and reaching a peak at 300 in the final months.
In contrast
, the number of books in West Waton and Church Mount stood at 50 in June and rose moderately to respectively 150 and about 125 in August, The figure
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Church Mount continued to grow slightly to 150 in September, compared to the remaining stable in West Eaton
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