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The chart gives information about Australian men’s and women’s regular physical activity in 2010, number of males and females and average between age groups. Figures are given for six categories from 15-24 to 65 and over years old.

The chart gives information about Australian men’s and women’s regular physical activity in 2010, number of males and females and average between age groups. Figures are given for six categories from 15-24 to 65 and over years old.
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The chart gives information about Australian men’s and women’s regular physical activity in 2010,
number
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the number
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 of males and females and
average
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the average
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 between age groups. Figures are given for six categories from 15-24 to 65 and over years old. It’s clear from
chart
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the chart
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 that there is only 1 part 15-24 where
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the males
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males
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 number is higher meanwhile other parts have a privilege
in
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 females.
Although
last
 bar 65 and over shows us
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the minimum
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 difference in amount of people who were leading active
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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. The data of Australian citizens aged from 25 to 64 years old provided information that more
womanhood
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women
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 were doing regular exercises.
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The maximum
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 percentage of active womankind viewed in
45
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the 45
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 to 54 age bracket, minimum was in
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 section.
According to
 the
chart
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chart,
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 the biggest part of men consisted
52.8
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of 52.8
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%, on the other side woman’s top was 53%,
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and minimum
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 indicators were 39.5% and 47.1% respectively. Superior limits between sexes were 5.1% and 13%, inferior limit was 0.4%.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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