The chart gives information about Australian men’s and women’s regular physical activity in 2010, number of males and females and average between age groups. Figures are given for six categories from 15-24 to 65 and over years old.
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The chart gives information about Australian men’s and women’s regular physical activity in 2010,
number
of males and females and Correct article usage
the number
average
between age groups. Figures are given for six categories from 15-24 to 65 and over years old.
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the average
chart
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the chart
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males
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male
in
females. Change preposition
of
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the minimum
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lifestyles
womanhood
were doing regular exercises. Replace the word
women
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percentage of active womankind viewed in Correct article usage
The maximum
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to 54 age bracket, minimum was in Correct article usage
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indicators were 39.5% and 47.1% respectively. Superior limits between sexes were 5.1% and 13%, inferior limit was 0.4%.Correct word choice
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