The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the total amount of exported
products
in five groups in two different years, and the table demonstrates the
proportion
difference for each product export between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that upward trends are observed for the net worth in selling
products
overseas in each category and how much
proportion
changes in total worth except for gems and jewellery which portrays a downward trend compared to others.
According to
the bar graph, petroleum
products
and engineered goods were the two most valuable exports, with their values around 61 and 58
billion
in 2015 and both increased to approximately 62
billion
in 2016. the total worth
in
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agriculture
products
and textiles
also
rose to 31
billion
in 2016, starting from 30 and 25
billion
respectively in 2015.
In contrast
, the figure demonstrated
the
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gentle decrease in gems and jewellery from 42 to 41
billion
. Among
five
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categories, the
proportion
of textiles change was the largest percentage, 15.24%,
while
agricultural
products
made the lowest
proportion
in terms of value changes only 0.81%. Petroleum
products
and Engineered goods
also
delineated a slight growth in one year by 3% and 8.5% respectively. The striking feature was the drop in gems and jewellery with 5.18% in change.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, proportion, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.

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