The graph below shows the comparison of a countries domestic production and consumption of rice since 1990 with projections until 2040. The chart below compares the consumption of rice and other staples over the same period.

The graph below shows the comparison of a countries domestic production and consumption of rice since 1990 with projections until 2040. The chart below compares the consumption of rice and other staples over the same period.
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the quantity of
rice
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production
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and
consumption
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in
this
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X country from 1990 to 2040,
while
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the given bar chart
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a comparison between
rice
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consumption
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and other categories in the same period.
Overall
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, it is evident that both
rice
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production
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and
rice
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consumption
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showed an upward trend. It should
also
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be noted that the proportion of
rice
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consumed experienced an
increase
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and is expected to decline in the next 20 years,
whereas
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a reserve pattern could be observed in the figure of other food crops used between 1990 and 2020
as well as
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predicted to
increase
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in 2040. In terms of the line graph, in 1990,
rice
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consumption
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was the highest, at approximately 35
million
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tons
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.
Rice
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production
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,
however
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, accounted for the lowest value, at about 25
million
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tons
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. From 2000 to 2020, the data on both categories witnessed dramatic growth to around 40
million
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tons
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in the quantity of
rice
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production
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and about 30
million
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tons
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in the amount of
rice
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used.
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there will be a significant
increase
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to nearly 75
million
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tons
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in the data on
rice
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production
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,
as well as
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just above 60
million
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tons
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of
rice
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used
at the end
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of the time surveyed. Turning towards the bar chart, the proportion of
rice
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consumed experienced a drastic
increase
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to about 85% in 2020,
while
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the percentage of other food crops used
was
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significantly
declining
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to just under 25%. In 2024, the figure for both groups was similar, at approximately 50%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rice, production, consumption, increase, million, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "comparison" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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