The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The chart illustrates the
proportion
of females
and males
Correct pronoun usage
who was
was
successful when taking the driving license exam in one Asian country from 1980 to 2010. Units are measured in the percentage of driving tests passed.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Overall
it clearly can be seen that,
the Remove the comma
apply
proportion
of females
passed are
higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
is
males
. Moreover
, the percentage of men who passed the exam relatively stable over the years.
In the
terms of Correct article usage
apply
females
with the highest proportion
of passing the test, at the start, the female percentage stood at just below 50. In the following ten years, the proportion
of females
increased to approximately 10 in 2000. From this
point onward, it decreased to around 5 in the final year.
Regarding to
the men who completed the test with a lower Remove the preposition
apply
proportion
, males
started at under 30 in 1980. After ten years, the proportion
of males
grows up to below 40. In 2000 the proportion
of males
slightly rose until below 50. However
, in the final year, the proportion
of men remain steady at below 50Submitted by teretryandbuy on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, females, males with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 8 times.
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