The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart illustrates the
proportion
of
females
and
males
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was
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were
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successful when taking the driving license exam in one Asian country from 1980 to 2010. Units are measured in the percentage of driving tests passed.
Overall
it clearly can be seen that
,
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the
proportion
of
females
passed
are
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is
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higher than
males
.
Moreover
, the percentage of men who passed the exam relatively stable over the years. In
the
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terms of
females
with the highest
proportion
of passing the test, at the start, the female percentage stood at just below 50. In the following ten years, the
proportion
of
females
increased to approximately 10 in 2000. From
this
point onward, it decreased to around 5 in the final year. Regarding
to
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the men who completed the test with a lower
proportion
,
males
started at under 30 in 1980. After ten years, the
proportion
of
males
grows up to below 40. In 2000 the
proportion
of
males
slightly rose until below 50.
However
, in the final year, the
proportion
of men remain steady at below 50
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 8 times.

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