The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph depicts the predicted demographic growth of Cina and
India
between 2000-2050
Overall
,
while
India
is predicted to increase its
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number of
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population
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over the period, China is projected to increase its population only until 2030 and after that it is foreseen to decline steadily. In 2000,
India
's population was at 1 billion and it
rised
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raised
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rises
significantly every decade and it is projected to soar at 1.6 billion in 2050. Meanwhile, In 2000, China's
populations
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growth started at just above 1.2 billion which was higher than
India
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India's
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. It is projected to keep rising until 2030 and
then
will decline steadily.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words india with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected population growth
  • line graph
  • milestones
  • projections
  • plateau
  • decline
  • rate of growth
  • peak
  • surpass
  • crossover
  • period
  • trend analysis
  • comparative analysis
  • significantly
  • eventually
  • illustrates
  • specific period
  • trends
  • summarizes
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