The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the predicted demographic growth of Cina and
India
between 2000-2050
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while
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India
is predicted to increase its Use synonyms
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number of
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population
over the period, China is projected to increase its population only until 2030 and after that it is foreseen to decline steadily.
In 2000, Add an article
the population
India
's population was at 1 billion and it Use synonyms
rised
significantly every decade and it is projected to soar at 1.6 billion in 2050.
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raised
rose
rises
populations
growth started at just above 1.2 billion which was higher than Change the noun form
population
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India
. It is projected to keep rising until 2030 and Change noun form
India's
then
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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