given bar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product(IT and Service industry) in the Uk from 1992 to 2000. These values are caluculated in percentages. given bar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product(IT and Service industry) in the Uk from 1992 to 2000. These values are caluculated in percentages.the

given bar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product(IT and Service industry) in the Uk from 1992 to 2000. These values are caluculated in percentages.

given bar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product(IT and Service industry) in the Uk from 1992 to 2000. These values are caluculated in percentages.the
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of the IT and Service Industries in the United Kingdom between 1992 to 2000.
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, it demonstrated how the information technology (IT) sector dominates the service industry in terms of income throughout the 8-year period. In 2000, the IT sector marked a significant difference with its
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almost as twice as the other component.
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Information Technology gradually rose from more than 6% in 1992 and slowly rose to but hit a minimal decrease in 1996.
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rapid growth was noted adding 4% from the previous years and
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at 16%
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the other hand, the industry that provides services stood at 4% in 1992 and jumped to more than 6
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after two years and started to gradually and steadily increased
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from 1984 to 2000 and reached
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high of more than 8%.
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