The chart below illustrates the children, men, women rate who ate five portions of fruit and vegatables daily in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

The chart below illustrates the children, men, women rate who ate five portions of fruit and vegatables daily in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
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the contribution of
Children
,
Men
and
Women
that meets their daily five portions intakes of Fruit and Vegetables in the UK from 2001 until 2008. At a glance,
Women
have a higher rate compared to
Men
followed by
Children
.
However
, over the years, the rates for
Children
and
Men
is
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a positive trend resulting in a smaller gap with the
Women
's proportion in 2008. In 2006,
Women
's rate was the highest (at 35%) but showing soften
share
to 30% in 2008.
Likewise
,
Men
is
also
showing the highest proportion at 27% in 2006
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but rather had a stable performance in 2007 and a slight decline in 2008 to 26%
share
.
On the other hand
,
Children
's highest
share
happened in 2007 which had a modest gap with
Men
's
share
.
Children
's ratio was the one with the significant growth the most, almost double digits from 13% in 2001 to 24% in 2008.
This
number indicates that
Children
in the UK had better nutrition consumption over the year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographic groups
  • Consumption rates
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Stable or fluctuating intake
  • Dietary recommendations
  • Public health campaigns
  • Availability of fresh produce
  • Health outcomes
  • Obesity rates
  • Heart disease
  • Diet-related conditions
  • Further research
  • Public health policy
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