The chart below illustrates the children, men, women rate who ate five portions of fruit and vegatables daily in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

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the contribution of

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and

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that meets their daily five portions intakes of Fruit and Vegetables in the UK from 2001 until 2008. At a glance,

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have a higher rate compared to

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followed by

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, over the years, the rates for

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and

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a positive trend resulting in a smaller gap with the

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's proportion in 2008. In 2006,

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's rate was the highest (at 35%) but showing soften

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to 30% in 2008.

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also

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showing the highest proportion at 27% in 2006

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but rather had a stable performance in 2007 and a slight decline in 2008 to 26%

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's highest

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happened in 2007 which had a modest gap with

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's ratio was the one with the significant growth the most, almost double digits from 13% in 2001 to 24% in 2008.

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number indicates that

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in the UK had better nutrition consumption over the year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, men, women, share with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

169 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Demographic groups
Consumption rates
Significant increase/decrease
Stable or fluctuating intake
Dietary recommendations
Public health campaigns
Availability of fresh produce
Health outcomes
Obesity rates
Heart disease
Diet-related conditions
Further research
Public health policy

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The chart below illustrates the children, men, women rate who ate five portions of fruit and vegatables daily in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?

You recently went to see a good play at a theatre, but you did not enjoy it because of some problems in the theatre. Write a letter to the manager of the theatre. In your letter: say which play you saw and when describe the problems you experienced in the theatre suggest what the manager should do

Space travel to the Moon is often cited as one giant leap for mankind. Yet some people argue that this achievement made little differenct to our daily lives. What is your opinion?

The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter: – Describe the problem and why you are unhappy – Arrange for an engineer to visit your home – Request a reduction in your bill