The chart below illustrates the children, men, women rate who ate five portions of fruit and vegatables daily in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
The figure
show
the contribution of Change the verb form
shows
Children
, Men
and Women
that meets their daily five portions intakes of Fruit and Vegetables in the UK from 2001 until 2008.
At a glance, Women
have a higher rate compared to Men
followed by Children
. However
, over the years, the rates for Children
and Men
is
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showing
a positive trend resulting in a smaller gap with the Wrong verb form
shown
Women
's proportion in 2008.
In 2006, Women
's rate was the highest (at 35%) but showing soften share
to 30% in 2008. Likewise
, Men
is also
showing the highest proportion at 27% in 2006,
but rather had a stable performance in 2007 and a slight decline in 2008 to 26% Remove the comma
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share
.
On the other hand
, Children
's highest share
happened in 2007 which had a modest gap with Men
's share
. Children
's ratio was the one with the significant growth the most, almost double digits from 13% in 2001 to 24% in 2008. This
number indicates that Children
in the UK had better nutrition consumption over the year.Submitted by rizkyy.utama22 on
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