The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors ina particular country from 1978 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of
movie goers
among four Correct your spelling
moviegoers
age
groups
ina
particular nation. A cursory glance at the graph is enough to make it clear that Correct your spelling
in a
the
14 to Correct article usage
apply
24 year olds
were the Add a hyphen
24-year-olds
most fond
of Change the adjective
fondest
cinema
throughout the given period of three decades beginning 1978
.
From 1978 to 1988, the percentage of Change preposition
in 1978
cinema
attenders
fell from 90, 80, 60 and 40 to 75, 60, 40, Correct your spelling
attendees
ans
20, among the 14-24, 25-34, 35-49 and the 50+ Correct your spelling
and
age
groups
repectively
. The next decade saw an increase in the percentage of Correct your spelling
respectively
cinema
attendence
in all Correct your spelling
attendance
age
groups
. However
, the next five years after that saw stability in the cinema
attendance in all age
groups
. However
, the next five years after that saw stability in the cinema
attendance in all age
groups
. From 2003 to 2008, the popularity of cinema
decreased in all age
groups
except for the over 50s, who started going to the cinema
in more numbers.
Overall
, it is clear that
going to the cinema
was more popular among the younger age
groups
and the trends were almost similar throughout, except for the 50 plus age
group, after 2003, when their percentage of cinema
attendance increased, whereas
that of all other age
groups
decreased.Submitted by heoeunsae on
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