The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.

The line

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graph

provides data about the volume of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK from 1996 to 2003.

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grow

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substantiall

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substantially

in the past 7 years, the majority of methods surged

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within

the years.

However

, Internet access started the grow in 1999. In detail, in 1996 the CD player and Home computer were nearly 60% and 30% respectively. The CD player exhibited a

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gradual

increase throughout the years until 80%

in

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the end of the period, which was the largest increase. Meanwhile, the internet started to climb in 1998 and it grew continuously until more than 40% in 2003, but

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rate was the lowest in

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with other methods.

Move

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on to the Cell phone line was 20% and

then

remained steady until 1996

where

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it experienced a

fluctation

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fluctuation

in the increase, in 2003 there was a growth of 50% exceeding computer and

internt

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internet

service.