The chart below shows the amount of time that people in two age group speny on different activities in the US. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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was
spent by people on some different Unnecessary verb
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activities
in two age groups of
the US.
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in
It is clear that
there were two trends in six types of activities
. Whereas
watching TV, reading and relaxing/thinking were done more in ages
75 and over, in ages
15-19, the opposite pattern was
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occured
and they usually Correct your spelling
occurred
do
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did
activities
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same activities
remain
.
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To begin
with, watching TV, reading and relaxing/thinking, the figures of
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for
ages
75 and over in watching TV was 4.5 hours per day, which more
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is more
half
than Change preposition
than half
ages
15-19 at 25 in the US. The
similar pattern was Correct article usage
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showed
in reading and Wrong verb form
shown
realing
/ thinking when a day of Correct your spelling
reading
realising
ages
75 and over was
accounted for 2 Unnecessary verb
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activities
with 1 hours
and 30 minutes respectively, Change to a singular noun
hour
while
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in
ages
15-19 was fewer then
1 hour.
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contrast
was happened in three daily Add a comma
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activities
. In socializing/communicating, the hours in
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ages
15-19 just was slightly more than ages
75 and over, both playing games/ computer use for leisure and sports/exercise and reaceation
in Correct your spelling
recreation
reaction
ages
15-19 were more than double remaining ages
75 and over.Submitted by hoangminhnhat150206 on
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