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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
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The given line graph illustrates the total
population
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 and its estimation in India and China for over 50
years
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50-year
period
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 from 2000 to 2050. Units are measured in billions.
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, It can clearly be seen that the
number
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 of citizens in the two countries rose by the end of the
period
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. In terms of the country with the highest
population
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 at the start, China started at around 1.25 in 2000. In the following 30 years, the
number
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 experienced a steady increase and reached a peak of approximately 1.45 before the predicted
number
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will
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gradually
fall
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 to 1.4 by the end of the given
period
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. Regarding another country with a lower
population
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, India stood at precisely 1.0 in 2000. After that, the
number
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 increased steadily, and the projection has a similar trend which is to rise and eventually surpass China's
population
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 after 2030. By the end of the
period
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, India will have 1.6 citizens in 2050.

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