You accidentally left an important item while checking out of a hotel. Please write a letter to the hotel manager and ask him/her to send the item back to you. In your letter provide the details of your stay; describe the item you left behind; tell the hotel manager how to return it to you.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to request you to find my

belonging

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in the

room

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which

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I stayed previously and I personally request you to return back my items to my home address. I am Sam, currently working as a Software Developer in the Information Technology

deaprtment

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department

in one of the prestigious companies. Recently, I stayed in your esteemed hotel for my employment

purpose

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purposes

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, I

checked-in

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checked in

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on April 12th, 2023 with

the

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apply

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room

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number 401 and

also

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and

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checked-out

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checked out

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on April 15th, 2023. During my stay, it was so

plesantful

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plentiful

to live in one of your

excutive

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executive

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room

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. it made me

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apply

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feel comfortable.

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, During my

stay

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I had a tremendous number of tasks to do which made me

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feel busy and

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, I completely focused on my job.

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, when I was deeply focused

with

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my work I totally

forgot

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left

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my wallet and my watch in the

room

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itself

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apply

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As a result

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, it was left behind in the hotel

room

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. Here are some identifications for my properties. My wallet will be black in colour with red lines on top and my watch will be silver in colour with

blue

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a blue

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shade on

side

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the side

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, I would like to share a recommended way to return back my items to my home address. You

can

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may

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prefer

UPS

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the UPS

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courier service because they

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provide excellent service

as well as

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they will send the parcel as soon as possible.

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, I can start to work without any hesitation. I hope you can understand my situation and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider using more varied sentence structures to make the letter more dynamic and engaging.

Task Achievement

Double-check for small typing errors to enhance the letter's professionalism (e.g., 'plesantful' should be 'pleasant', and 'excutive' should be 'executive').

Task Achievement

You provided all the necessary details regarding your stay, the item description, and return instructions with clarity.

Coherence and Cohesion

The overall structure of the letter is logical, with each paragraph focusing on a single topic.

Task Achievement

You've chosen a respectful and appropriate writing tone for the situation.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

270 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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