You accidentally left an important item while checking out of a hotel. Please write a letter to the hotel manager and ask him/her to send the item back to you. In your letter provide the details of your stay; describe the item you left behind; tell the hotel manager how to return it to you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to request you to find my belonging
in the Fix the agreement mistake
belongings
room
which
I stayed previously and I personally request you to return back my items to my home address.
I am Sam, currently working as a Software Developer in the Information Technology Change preposition
in which
deaprtment
in one of the prestigious companies. Recently, I stayed in your esteemed hotel for my employment Correct your spelling
department
purpose
. Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
In addition
, I checked-in
on April 12th, 2023 with Correct your spelling
checked in
the
Correct article usage
apply
room
number 401 and also
, I
Correct your spelling
and
checked-out
on April 15th, 2023. During my stay, it was so Correct your spelling
checked out
plesantful
to live in one of your Correct your spelling
plentiful
excutive
Correct your spelling
executive
room
. it made me Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
to
feel comfortable.
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apply
Furthermore
, During my stay
I had a tremendous number of tasks to do which made me Add a comma
stay,
to
feel busy and Change the verb form
apply
also
, I completely focused on my job. Moreover
, when I was deeply focused with
my work I totally Change preposition
on
forgot
my wallet and my watch in the Verb problem
left
room
itself
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
As a result
, it was left behind in the hotel room
. Here are some identifications for my properties. My wallet will be black in colour with red lines on top and my watch will be silver in colour with blue
shade on Correct article usage
a blue
side
.
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the side
Finally
, I would like to share a recommended way to return back my items to my home address. You can
prefer Verb problem
may
UPS
courier service because they Correct article usage
the UPS
do
provide excellent service Verb problem
apply
as well as
they will send the parcel as soon as possible. Therefore
, I can start to work without any hesitation.
I hope you can understand my situation and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
SamSubmitted by jeeveshkb22 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider using more varied sentence structures to make the letter more dynamic and engaging.
Task Achievement
Double-check for small typing errors to enhance the letter's professionalism (e.g., 'plesantful' should be 'pleasant', and 'excutive' should be 'executive').
Task Achievement
You provided all the necessary details regarding your stay, the item description, and return instructions with clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The overall structure of the letter is logical, with each paragraph focusing on a single topic.
Task Achievement
You've chosen a respectful and appropriate writing tone for the situation.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite