You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The given chart shows the rate of
men
and
women
aged between 60 -64 in employment in
four
countries
in 1970 and in 2000.
overall
,
men
and
women
worked many
percentage
in 1970 compared to 2000 but compared to
men
, working
women
percentage
is lower than
men
in
four
countries
in both years.
Firstly
, In these
four
countries
,
men
had worked high
percentage
in 1970. In Australia 74% of
men
worked in 1970 compared to 2000 it reduced to 47%, in Japan 84% in 1970 to 76% in 2000, in
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
show examples
73% in 1970 to 55% in 2000 and in Belgium 79% in 1970 to 19% in 2000.
Secondly
, in these
four
countries
compared to
men
,
women
had a small
percentage
of people working aged 60-64. In Australia 18% of
women
worked in 1970 compared to 2000 it increased to 19%, in Japan 43% in 1970 to 40% in 2000 in
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
show examples
36% in 1970 to 38% in 2000 and in Belgium 8% in 1970 to 7% in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, four, countries, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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