You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given chart shows the rate of
men
and women
aged between 60 -64 in employment in four
countries
in 1970 and in 2000.
overall
, men
and women
worked many percentage
in 1970 compared to 2000
but compared to men
, working women
percentage
is lower than men
in four
countries
in both years.
Firstly
, In these four
countries
, men
had worked high percentage
in 1970. In Australia 74% of men
worked in 1970 compared to 2000 it reduced to 47%, in Japan 84% in 1970 to 76% in 2000, in USA
73% in 1970 to 55% in 2000 and in Belgium 79% in 1970 to 19% in 2000.
Correct article usage
the USA
Secondly
, in these four
countries
compared to men
, women
had a small percentage
of people working aged 60-64. In Australia 18% of women
worked in 1970 compared to 2000 it increased to 19%, in Japan 43% in 1970 to 40% in 2000 in USA
36% in 1970 to 38% in 2000 and in Belgium 8% in 1970 to 7% in 2000.Correct article usage
the USA
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