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The bar graphs illustrate the proportion of who watched reality and game shows in men and women and 16-24, 25-34, 35-44 and 45+ age groups in Australia.

The bar graphs illustrate the proportion of who watched reality and game shows in men and women and 16-24, 25-34, 35-44 and 45+ age groups in Australia.
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The bar charts above present the number of
females
 and
males
 and
16
Correct article usage
the 16
show examples
-24, 35-44 and 45+
age
 groups who watched
real life
Add a hyphen
real-life
show examples
tv
Correct your spelling
TV
show examples
 and
game
 shows in Australia. The horizontal axes show the different
age
group
Fix the agreement mistake
groups
show examples
 and
females
 and
males
 yet the vertical axes illustrate the sum of
people
.
Overall
, there were more
females
 than
males
 watching reality shows
whereas
 more
males
 watched
game
 shows than
females
.
Moreover
,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
most
people
 watching both
game
Fix the agreement mistake
games
show examples
 and reality shows were from the
age
group
 45+ with 140
people
.
On the other hand
,
25
Correct article usage
the 25
show examples
-34
age
group
 had the least persons watching
game
 shows with nearly 40
people
. Almost 40
males
 and well over 60
people
 in the
age
group
 of 34-44
years
 old spend their time viewing reality shows. The total of
people
 in 25-34 and 35-44 watching
game
 programs was almost equal. 50
people
 from 16-24
years
 viewed
game
 shows. 45+
years
individuals
Change preposition
of individuals
show examples
 watching
game
 shows were double that of 35-44 and 25-34
years
. 16-24 and 25-34 who watched
real life
Add a hyphen
real-life
show examples
 shows were more than
males
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words females, males, age, game, group, people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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