The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The bar chart provides data about the
number
of Use synonyms
volunteers
and paid Use synonyms
workers
in 4 different Use synonyms
roles
in the Use synonyms
sports
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sector
in an Australian town in 2015
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Overall
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it is clear that
usually, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
volunteers
had higher Use synonyms
roles
in the Use synonyms
sports
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sector
than paid Use synonyms
workers
, particularly in 3 Use synonyms
roles
about coaching, Therapists and other sections. Use synonyms
While
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,
the referees of paid Remove the comma
apply
workers
had a higher figure than the Use synonyms
volunteers
.
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According to
the coaching Linking Words
volunteers
, the highest figure amounts to 75 Use synonyms
people
in 4 Use synonyms
roles
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Moreover
, the other sections had a Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
around 60 Use synonyms
while
The Therapist role had 45 Linking Words
people
in the Use synonyms
sports
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sector
. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
people
in referee Use synonyms
roles
had the lowest figure around 30 Use synonyms
people
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overall
of Linking Words
volunteers
in the Use synonyms
sports
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sector
.
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In addition
, The Linking Words
overall
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number
of paid Use synonyms
workers
was lower than Use synonyms
volunteers
, Use synonyms
while
the other sections had the highest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
around 50 Use synonyms
while
the coaching had 45 Linking Words
people
. Use synonyms
However
, the therapists and referees had similar numbers of Linking Words
people
to 39-40 Use synonyms
people
.Use synonyms
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