The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The bar chart provides data about the
number
of volunteers
and paid workers
in 4 different roles
in the sports
sector
in an Australian town in 2015
Overall
it is clear that
usually, the number
of volunteers
had higher roles
in the sports
sector
than paid workers
, particularly in 3 roles
about coaching, Therapists and other sections. While
,
the referees of paid Remove the comma
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workers
had a higher figure than the volunteers
.
According to
the coaching volunteers
, the highest figure amounts to 75 people
in 4 roles
. Moreover
, the other sections had a number
of people
around 60 while
The Therapist role had 45 people
in the sports
sector
. However
, the people
in referee roles
had the lowest figure around 30 people
overall
of volunteers
in the sports
sector
.
In addition
, The overall
number
of paid workers
was lower than volunteers
, while
the other sections had the highest number
of people
around 50 while
the coaching had 45 people
. However
, the therapists and referees had similar numbers of people
to 39-40 people
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